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Wrath has consumed me... You seem to think I still have control... Your wrong, look into my eyes... I will show you the true meaning of Pain, Suffering, and Death. I am the Harbringer of Destruction, None shall escape me!!!
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For starters the entire loop is off and you can EASILY tell when it repeats. Second, the song itself is just a small repeat in itself with little differences. Third, nothing really is special and it doesn't have a unique feeling to it as some songs do.
I suggest working much harder on the next song... By fixing the errors you made in this one.
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I can see a slow moving boss encounter going well with this but, maybe if you used the first part and tacked in a sped up version and make it better paced it would fit any boss. Not sure, I'm also not giving to much thought into this as I usually do with my posts...
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Well done my friend! You've caught my attention now... This is just in time too.... For I'm making a video of a Game on Halloween. [I won't be able to upload to Newgrounds sadly] This is just what I need... An insane beat and dark tone but, not over the top. Proper length for it too... NOW ONTO THE SONG- The 2 second start was my only wondering of why you made it in that manner. It seems misplacing for the rest of the song for it didn't affix a loop and it didn't really fit the tone I beleive. The manatical laughter though was addicting... I began to chuckle and grin... Then again I'm an insane maniac set on slaughtering everyone I meet~ The 2nd minute gave a "Flight of Fright" feel to it. Of course another great addition to the first minute of what I'd like to call "The Encounter of Insanity"... The last 16 seconds also had a misplacing I feel... If you were to edit this in any way I'd mostly just say give the first 2 seconds and last 16 second to the chopping block... Then tone down the 'static' a few notches at the start to emphasize the voice laughing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And wow... Show me the video when you make it! :)
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I like slow start... Sure- but a minute long of an extremely SLOW start... and he piano ddn't really fit into what it evolved into. I do like it though but, there is way to much to improve on. (3/5)
Author's Response:
Sorry you don't like the intro to much, (Or rather it's length.) I definitely knew when I wrote it that it wouldn't be very warmly welcomed by Newgrounders. But somehow I made front page with it this week, so somebody must've liked it. ;-)
I'm glad you liked it despite the length though. I'm curious, what about the piano didn't you think was appropriate. Not trying to bust your balls or anything, but a good number of listeners said they loved the piano. And then a lot said they hated it. There seems to be no middle ground.
Personally, I feel it sets up the atmosphere rather well. As I mentioned above it is supposed to be a techno/industrial boss battle song. And our hero is strolling along happily when he is confronted by the evil villain. And so on and so forth. Do you think it would have simply been more appropriate to start right off the bat with the synth and guitar stuff?
I really feel it would have lost a lot of personality that way, but I'm not really sure how I would shorten the piano without just getting rid of it. Because it flows so well, and really it follows a certain structure.
But yea, if you get bored and happen to actually read my response (Cause I never know if anyone actually does,) feel free to hit me back on any/all those things. If not, no biggie. I doubt anyone reads my responses anyways.
Hopefully next time I won't disappoint ya. :-P
Thanks for the review!
-Gravey-
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"Oh this'll be some emo crap that this 'nemesitheory' guy made that I can make fun of because he made it" How far was I wrong?! Jeez! Downloaded, 10/10, 5/5. Keep the awesome or up!
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Well... I haven't exactly kept up to date with your songs I'll admit, Returning to the Portal was just a fluke...Finding your submission was a blessing!
As usual you don't disappoint me.
Author's Response:
=O you havent kepy up! make it a weekly thing to keep up. tahts usually when i submit a demo or so.
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For he beat to go outta control and just lose itself to the inner beat... It didn't happen but at 2:24 it got a nice rythm to it... Mabe its just me but, when starting with a 'slow' beat and not having a fast/hardcore part within it is just a No No.
(4/5)
~Thanks for the head up. Does make it easier.
Author's Response:
Well not every song has to be in your face, or have a really in your face moment. Sometimes it is just nice to have a song that kinda flows along at a meandering pace.
Also, I tried to make the piano a little more of the focus in this song. A lot of people have been asking me to take more time to make the piano the focus of my writings. So I decided to do just that with this song. :-)
Thanks for the review!
-Gravey-
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You send me a personal tell when I dont know you... Wanting my personal opinon on your music (I know I'm epic and all but...)... For this? I'm glad you told me about it! Keep up the great work! I was hoping the song could've been abit more different throughout but, for a Patrol music it fit well. I'll be watching you now... Don't disappoint me!
Author's Response:
Lol! Well there are two ways I pm people. If I see they left a favorable review on a song similar in style to the one I'm introducing to them. Or if they have previously left me good reviews on songs, or favorited me as an author.
I don't just go out and randomly pm people that don't seem to like the style of song I'm showing them. That would be ridiculous cause they would just vote zero. I simply pm people when I see that they might like a certain song of mine. And everyone who has fav'd me.
So does that clear things up?
I'm glad you shall be keeping your eyes on me from now on. I shall do my best not to disappoint!
-Gravey-
P.S. - I'm glad ya liked the song btw!!! X-D
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Does not surpass mine! I was hoping this could have some face smashing sounds but, we we're left only listening to some kid tantrum music...
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This gave me the feeling of a "Fight for Justice"... Do you think you can do the polar opposite now and make it so the 'player' you are is EVIL... so instead of fighting for "Peace and Justice" you can have the feeling your fighting for "Supreme Power and Domination"? I give you this challenge... Its up for you to decide if you take it.
Author's Response:
Interesting challenge. I'll think about it, since melodies started coming to mind when you mentioned "Supreme Power and Domination"...Let's just see what happens then.
Thanks!
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